5 Tips for Fast-Paced Novels That Don’t Lose Your Reader

Momentum only works if everyone stays on the same page.

I recently had the pleasure of reading the first 5,000 words of The Prize by Anne Moore.

Her manuscript follows Philip, a prize-winning architect, in the aftermath of winning a life-changing award. Inspired by The Prize, this post will break down key tips for fast-paced fiction.

Pssst—want feedback on your first 5,000 words? Check out this post.

“Fast-paced” has become one of the most ubiquitous compliments in publishing. Agents and editors want it, readers devour it. But as writers, we know pacing is a balancing act: move too slowly and you lose your audience; move too fast and you… also lose your audience.

Here are five techniques to keep readers hooked.

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1. Don’t Just Name-Drop Characters

Fast novels often mean fast introductions. But be careful: one of the quickest ways to derail your readers is dumping a dozen character names in the first few pages (I’m looking at you, Jane Austen). You never want to risk them flipping back for answers or giving up entirely.

Here are a few questions to ask yourself:

• Does this character need to be introduced here?

• Does their entrance add tension or clarity?

• Can one character serve the job of two background extras?

• Can a label help (“his sister,” “the neighbor,” “her manager”) until their presence matters?

Don’t be afraid to utilize temporary shorthand: the teacher, the driver, the friend she definitely trusts too much. Readers latch onto roles much faster than proper nouns.

2. Know When to Embrace Mystery

There is one exception to the above rule: intentional mystery. Sometimes, withholding context behind a character’s role in the story can create intrigue.

For example, if we know our straight, male protagonist is having an affair, the introduction of an unexplained female character will add suspense. The reader will wonder—is she the one he’s seeing? Or is she just a decoy?

But how can you tell if you should leave out character context? You can generally do so if:

• The reader knows a question is being raised

• The moment feels suspenseful or charged

• The reveal will matter later
  

3. Use Voice to Carry Momentum

Fast pacing isn’t just scene cuts. A character whose internal monologue is clipped, cynical, or hyper-focused creates speed simply through how they think. Short sentences, sharp observations, and quick transitions can reveal personality while keeping the narrative sprinting ahead.

How do you use that in your writing? Instead of spending paragraphs explaining that your protagonist is impatient, ambitious, stressed, or self-absorbed, let us feel it through the rhythm of their thoughts.

But remember—using voice to carry momentum will only feel natural if your narrator has urgency baked into their worldview. If your narrator is an elderly grandmother who prefers to linger over every interaction, your reader will feel the disconnect.

4. Pair Momentum with Stakes

In fast-paced fiction, readers don’t just want action. They want direction. Or, in another word, stakes.

A story races forward when readers know what could go wrong, what could be lost, and/or what is already unraveling from the jump. You don’t have to reveal the entire dramatic arc in chapter one, but readers should have a reason to care what happens next.

5. Anchor the Reader in Time (Even if Lightly)

One sneaky issue in fast-paced manuscripts? Readers lose track of when anything is happening.

Reading scene after scene after scene without any obvious transition can make the whole book feel like one long day unless you plant little breadcrumbs of passing time, such as:

• “Later that morning…”

• “Three days into the…”

• “At the end of her shift…”

• “While the sun was setting…”

Don’t worry, your story will still move quickly. A few well-placed temporal cues give readers the confidence to follow you at full speed.

Just remember: fast pacing doesn’t mean cutting corners; it means cutting clutter.

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